THE GOOD:
1: Fast pacing. The story's fast pacing, and it kept me reading. It isn't the boring history book kind of thing (lol)
2: Well-developed characters. The characters have a lot of personality, and they are just..... precious.
3: suspense. I know, this story's not a thriller, but I have a bad feeling in my guts.... And the suspense of how the story will end keeps me going on.
4: Description. One of the things I struggle with. I can't even describe this book. (Why am I even a reviewer?) But you seem to do it perfectly.
5: Perfect Grammar. I couldn't find a single mistake! well done.
The Bad:
1: long chapters. The chapters were interesting, but quite long. It was all well for me, but some readers might get bored. (it's not the book, it's the length of the chapters. Honest.)
2: The female narrator sounds.... obsessed? I mean, it's okay to love that guy, but she was a bit over-the-top. (like in Twilight to give an example - sorry, if you love Twilight)
3: Killing the character. HOW DARE YOU - *my friends hold me back* I'LL HAVE MY REVENGE! (this isn't really a bad thing, but still bro - why?)
I couldn't find many problems with this book, and the plot of the story is interesting enough to keep readers reading, even if they don't like romance novels. (looking at you, my reflection.)
READ THIS IT'S AMAZING
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Story Critic | Closed For Now
RandomHey guys! The title says it all. I can read your books for you and point out the goods and bads. Don't give up, keep writing!
