Sorry, I thought I already did your review and forgot about it!
(won't happen again, ever.)
The Good:
1: Good Plot. I absolutely loved the plot. Keep it up.
2: Detailed. I love the way you describe the things. Your writing style is sweet, and I just loved it.
3: Secrets. Authors have to keep secrets, and not giving away to much information is of course important. But not everyone can do that. You can though. You can create suspense, and I like that.
4: You give me the Mary Higgen Clark vibes, (I am sorry if you don't like her) and that, my friend, is a good thing.
5: SAD. You know how to pull at the right strings to get people crying, girl.
The Bad:
1: I don't see anything bad, as you fixed your mistakes after other reviews, so keep it up!
@stxrkissed
SAD, AMAZING AND ENCHANTING
YOU ARE READING
Story Critic | Closed For Now
RandomHey guys! The title says it all. I can read your books for you and point out the goods and bads. Don't give up, keep writing!
