A Promise from hell

It was dark all so dark. My head feels like it was hit by a train. Everything feels so strange, I opened my eyes and was welcomed by a pit of darkness. Where am I? I start to panic as the memories from the night before came flooding back like a wave of torment. I try to move my legs, but I couldn't, it was like I was paralysed. I tried to scream for help, but my mouth was dry as a dessert on a hot day. I tried to move again and this time my body decides to cooperate. I stood up and felt around the walls for a door, but it was like there was none, the walls felt so cold it was like death was surrounding me. I panic more then I heard laughter it was bouncing off the walls. I spun around looking for the source of it but found none. It was then I realised the laughter was in my head. I recognize it, it was the evil from my nightmare.

I was scared, terrified I didn't know what was going to happen. I had all these things going on in my head. I didn't know how much time had passed. Suddenly I heard a door opening, the hinges screaming the wider the door opened. But that's not possible! I checked everywhere there was no door. The light started to bleed into the room as the door got wider. This is it I get to see the face of the person keeping me here. The door is fully open but there was none on the other side of it. It can't be, no door opens by itself. But I saw an opportunity and I took it. Time to get out of here. I fled the room I couldn't get out of there quick enough.

This house seemed really familiar like I've been here before. Then I remember I've dreamed about this house for months, but that's what it was a dream. Then a wave of dread hit me hard, if this place was real then would the evil monster that lives in it would be real too. I had to get out of here now! I saw the front door and went for my escape. Just as I touch the ice cold handle the house started to vibrate as the house started to wake up from its deep slumber. Fear gripped me, I tried to open the door, but it wouldn't open I was trapped here. Shadows of the monster's victims started to move around the house. I heard that laughter again ringing in my ears, AHHH I hate that sound. "GET OUT OF MY HEAD!" I shouted. I ran, there had to be a way out of here.

I ran upstairs hoping that there was a window I could escape from. It was the wrong thing to do. I heard footsteps behind me. A door nearby opened I didn't think but ran in the room without thinking about what horror could be larking in there. I was frozen still; the room was destroyed it was like a beast with extremely long claws had been in here. There was an awful smell like a body was decaying. There was something dark on the walls it was then I realized it was blood peeling off the walls. This was the room where the monster killed his victims. I can feel the screams of every victim. Without thinking I ran out of the room.

The front door was in my sight; I grabbed the handle and the house screamed with power, the door where slamming open and shut the hinges singing their own song. The furniture was shaking as if they knew something was going to happen. Then the laughter came, it was all around me suffocating me. I knew my life was going to end. I faced the door leaning against it as if I could steal some of its power. I knew he was behind me I could feel the power come of him in waves "you can't escape." I could hear him smile. I could feel him in my head making me turn to face him. His eyes were like death itself. It tried to get more time by staling him. "what do you want with me?" my voice shook projecting how scared I was. He just smiled showing what looked like fangs. "You'll find out soon." . I froze. It can't be they are not real, this had to be madness yes it has to be, the madness has swallowed me hole. His smile only grew then before I could make another thought he struck for my neck like a snake striking its prey. Agony slammed into me at full force I screamed, I knew none would help but the pain was excruciating. I could feel myself grow week as my life force leaves my body. The cold wrapped me up like a blanket until everything goes dark.

I sat up so quickly, sweat covered my body. It was just a dream. I wiped the sweat off my forehead and got out of bed. I went to the bathroom on shaky legs and look in the mirror and the girl looking back horrified  me. The refection had paler skin, brighter eyes, blood red lips. Panic larked its head as I opened my mouth and to my horror, two fangs appeared, and agony ripped through my abdomen. NOO!! It wasn't a dream it was real and now I'm a monster just like. I screamed in horror as the laughter of my nightmare returned.  

This is a short story that I did a while ago and I'm not to sure if I should make it a into a full story. Let me know what you think and if I should make it a full story. If there are any spelling and grammar mistakes, witch I'm sure there are please let me know. 

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