Hey, if you're new, welcome! If you are not, uh, welcome back!
If you didn't know already this is a rewritten version of my Warrior Oc story, “Lazyclaw's Shadow” the original was trash so hopefully this will be better. Please if you've read the original don't spoil anything in the comments.
If you are from the old one then you've probably already seen that I changed a few roles such as Spiritfur, who used to be ShadowClan's med. Cat but now She's been replaced with Redberry and now she's a warrior, plus a few of the descriptions have changed slightly to match names or Because of sudden changes (I'm looking at you Hyperpaw) and if you remember Darkwillow (I'll be surprised if you do since she was mentioned once) I decided to change her name to Brightwillow since she was a white cat and the prefix “dark” didn't make sense for her. Also, pikapaw and drypaw's temporary kittypet names will just be Pika and Dry.
Uncreative I know
Anyway
There are also quite a few differences between this new one and the original, example certain characters and Clans may not be mentioned as often as they were in the original so that I can start to introduce more important characters or Clans (don't worry WindClan lovers, they will not be completely ignored in this version, in fact, they got a pretty important role later on, Plus more characters from WindClan will be important)
Also, things like moons, seasons, deaths, and other things like that will be monitored more closely at the beginning of each chapter, just to stop problems like a gathering every other chapter like the original story. (and to avoid things like an apprentice that's like, 36 moons old and a kit that's like, 10 moons old.)
Also, if you notice a spelling or grammar mistake just point it out in the comments, so I can fix it because I don't want to look back on this and go “Jesus did I even know how to spell?”
Anyway, I'll stop rambling, enjoy the book!
Btw as of November 23, 2019,
chapter 1 is still being written but it will be published soon, December 1st or second at the latest, have a great day
*as of June 23rd, 2020 Hyperpaw and all other ocs made by the same creator have been removed.
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Lazyclaw's Shadow (WARRIORS) (REWRITTEN) (DISCONTINUED)
FantasySpot is an ordinary kittypet that's no older than 6 moons. She lives happily with her mother Midnight, her sister Luna, and her two younger brothers Dry and Pika. Out of curiosity and or stupidity, they leave the comfort of their home to go take a l...
