Sally's 30 day writing challenge

Day 6: The Treasure

"This map has been passed down many generations through the Wolts family, the only Wolt that is alive these days is young Jillian she is one of the last people that will be able to touch this map she will have to find the long lost Wolts treasure." The man says pointing towards a map the size of an T.V (one of the box ones all our parents had when they were young.)

                                                A SHORT TEN YEARS LATER

"Hey, Jill what are you doing for your birthday next week."
"I was thinking to jut stay home and read," Jill says with a confused look on her face.
"Buuuutttttt... you're turning sixteen, you have to do something." the girl looks at Jill with puppy eyes. "Have a party or something."
"Fine," Jill says strictly looking at the girl with the face that her dad used to look at her before he got taken away. A short slap of silence runs throughout each of there body's. "Hey Suzy... you wanna' read with me on my birthday," she says with a cheeky grin.
"OH MY GOSH, I thought you'd never ask."

     ONE WEEK LATER

"Happy birthday Jillian honey," a lady says kneeling down at Jillian's bed, placing a sheet of wrinkled paper down a the foot of the clean yellow sheets.
"Please don't call me that, mama, I prefer Jill it makes me sound older," Jill says hugging the lady. "What's this?"
"Oh you know just a little something for my little sixteen year old."
"OH MY GOSH, you got them to take it out of the museum." Jill takes a brake to look at the map. "Thank you thank you so much mum... I love it." Jills eyes begin to fill with tears. The only thing she ever really wanted for her birthday was her birth mum to come back alive and her dad to get out of jail, but unfortunately that could never take place in real life only in her imagination. The closes she could get to her past family is this map the treasure that has been kept from her, her whole life this one map is the only thing she wants.
"Oh sweetly don't cry." Jills mum wipes the tears off of Jills cheeks.
"Can we do this now... I'll get dress and have a shower... I'll also call Suzy see if she doesn't mind me canceling our plans," Jill says thinking out loud.
"Why don't you invite Suzy you to can do it together."
"Ok lets do that... thank you I do really appreciate it." Suzy gets out of bed and hugs her mum.

Writers note:
I'm sorry if i missed a couple days i just an't feeling 100%.
And sorry if i upload two a day I'm not really sure where I'm up to.