Sally's 30 day writing challenge

Day 12: End Zone

Continuing from Day 11 leaden Rain Clouds:

...I walk up in the man in the shadows "I have a question for you."
"What is it this time," he says with a stern voice, as his eyes meet my shoes.
"When will you tell me your name, you are all secretive I never know when your being serious or funny."
"I will never tell you my name, I will never you anything about me." He says hiding his face.
"Why do you hide your face from me?" He glares at me trying not to find my eyes. "You... you know my secret... you bursted you!"
"The End Zone."
"Yes... It is happening The End Zone is coming... And I'm the first."
"The first of many." He says tuning away to walk off.
I quickly ask. "What else do you know?"
"A stare of a Meyerem will kill you in a harts beat." He says looking up to my chin.
"Yes... yes... you know." Grab his chin with my thumb. "look at me... look in my eyes... you surely know what happens when our eyes meet." His eyes finally meet mine. "I liked you." The last words I say to him before his skin turns to a leaden grey.

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Detective Benit walks up to the mat that lays on top of the fern green grass, his eyes matches perfectly with the grass. "I'm guessing this is where he was?" He asks his partner, Detective Papadakis,while looking up from the mat to meet with her eyes.       
"I don't think so. We found this twilight book just under the mat. He dosn't look of the type to read this stuff." She holds up the bag with the book in side of it, quickly looking away from his eyes.
"CAN WE GET THIS BOOK BACK TO THE OFFICE!" He shouts hopping for people to hear him. "SOMETIME TODAY PLEASE!" Looks down from Detective Papadakis;s realising that he was staring at her, he scruffs his long hair that usually sits in a man bun low on his head. "Who found this guy?" Detective Benit asks his partner.
"Rough day a assume, or night?" Detective Pspsdakis asks as he walks by with her following him.
"I don't want to talk about it,"
Both the detectives walk up to a young woman, around twenty years of age, with a thick blonde hair that is cut into a bob.
"What time did you find the body?" Detective Benit asks getting straight to the point.
"Um... well I'm not sure I don't document my whole life, writing everything down." She bends down to pick something up off the ground.
"Stop... leave it alone," Detective Benit yells, leaving for Papadakis to handle the young woman.
"Ok... ok... I'll talk to her," she says looking behind her to look at Benit.

Writers Note:
Should I continue this story as it own thing? I'm not sure if should.