I know that I've said that I'm editing and blah, blah, blah. The truth is that I've been caught up with other stories (I've said this a thousand times too). Now, I watched Hobbs and Shaw for the umpteenth time and I started to re-read Torn and I've realized (it's also been brought to my attention) that there are things in my stories that do not make sense.
This story was uploaded to another website and the criticism was just ridiculous. I can take critiques, I enjoy it because it makes me a better writer and it makes my stories better. The thing that I cannot stand for and will not accept is someone disrespecting me because they don't like what I write. You have the option of not reading my story and there's also the fact that THIS IS A FANFICTION STORY! All of the facts DO NOT have to make perfect sense. Hopefully, any new writers reading this will see this and know YOU WRITE YOUR STORY HOWEVER YOU WANT!
I ended up removing the story from that website because I'm not gonna let strangers bring me down. Call me whatever you want but I'll leave it here because all of you readers are so amazing and absolutely wonderful to me and that's the kind of presence I want. All of your criticism and suggestions are to make things better.
With that being said, I watched the movie again because why the hell not! I started re-reading the story and there are things that now I see and they bother me. Between incorrect facts (I know after all that rant now I know that it's there and it irritates the hell out of me), grammatical errors and just things that I want to change now. So I am going to leave the story up but I am going to remove all of the chapters and rework them.
A lot of the story will remain the same. I'm going to update pictures, grammar and tweak things here and there so that the story is as amazing as all of you who continue to support me. I'm 28 years old and all of you amazing people have done such wonderful things to my confidence that I feel the need to make this all better for all of you. This will cut down my reads, I'm aware of that but as long as the story is at my best quality I'm okay with that. This is my way of giving back, I NEED this to be as amazing as all of my readers are to me.
I will place this chapter on all of the stories and start working on this ASAP. The next two weeks will be just for these stories and to update the most recent installment. As soon as I have the story corrected to my specificity I am planning on updating chapters every two days not to exploit or blow up notifications.
Now, if you want to see something/someone, if you don't want to see something/someone, if you want to add or take away a part please DM me. Let me know what it is that will make this better for YOU as a reader and please bear with me during this new editing process. I will be dedicating the next two weeks to JUST #HENNY and hopefully, everyone will love it.
AN 7/21/20: Thank you all for all of your support to me and my story. It really does mean the world to me.
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Survive
FanfictionLuke and Penny are back with the rest of the big Fast Family for more drama and fast-paced action. Third book in the series. Book 1: Torn Book 2: Fight Book 3: Survive Book 4: Persevere