Today I will be sharing with y'all the amount of times I use "suddenly" in some of my stories
So I'm just gonna go through chapters and put how many suddenlys there are
Cursed
Chapter 1: (Surprisingly) 0
Chapter 2: (Also surprisingly) 0
Chapter 3: 2
Chapter 4: (Another) 0
Chapter 5: 2
Chapter 6: 0
Chapter 7: 2
Chapter 8: 0
Chapter 9: 0 (these numbers are just going against the name of this chapter)
Chapter 10: 2
Chapter 11: 0
Chapter 12: 0 (there is a "sudden" tho)
Chapter 13: 1
Chapter 14: 1
Chapter 15: 1
Chapter 16: 1
Chapter 17: 0
Chapter 18: 1
Chapter 19: 0
Chapter 20: 0
Chapter 21: 1
Chapter 22: 1
Chapter 23: 0
Chapter 24: 0
Chapter 25: 0
Chapter 26: 1
Chapter 27: 1
Chapter 28: 2
Chapter 29: 2
Chapter 30: 0
Chapter 31: 0
Chapter 32: 0
Total (so far): 21
Ok that was a lot less than I expected
Probably because it's recent
Meaning it's better than my old stuff
So
My conclusion is
I'm gonna do the exact same thing with head hunters then maybe smile
Head Hunters
Chapter 1: 1
Chapter 2: 1
Chapter 3: 2 (that was more like it there were two like a paragraph apart lol)
Chapter 4: 0
Chapter 5: 3 (that's definitely more like it lol)
Chapter 6: 0
Chapter 7: 2
Chapter 8: 1
Chapter 9: 1
Chapter 10: 2
Chapter 11: 1
Chapter 12: 1 (considering the fact that this is the chapter Makoto gets stabbed, you'd think there'd be more)
Chapter 13: 1
Chapter 14: 1
Chapter 15: 1
Chapter 16: 2
Chapter 17: 1
Chapter 18: 1
Chapter 19: 0
Chapter 20: 0
Chapter 21: 0
Chapter 22: 0
Chapter 23: 0
Chapter 24: 1
Chapter 25: 1
Chapter 26: 1
Chapter 27: 0
Chapter 28: 0
Total: 25
Whilst that is a similar amount to Cursed, it's also less chapters and less words
(For reference, head hunters has like 48,000 whilst Cursed has (to be precise) 51,890 words as of this moment)
So let's get an average per chapter each
So 25/28= 0.89
So Head Hunters has an average of 0.89 suddenlys per chapter
Whilst Cursed has
0.66 per chapter
On average of course
I'm gonna do Smile too because that's one of my older works
After all, Head Hunters was from this year
If I hated myself that much, I would do I'm not a tsundere too
But I don't think I can force myself through that torture
Smile
Chapter 1: 0 (Jesus Christ I forgot how bad it was maybe I should rewrite Smile too)
Chapter 2: 0 (this isn't exactly and action story in any way so I shouldn't be shocked)
Chapter 3: 2
Chapter 4: 1
Chapter 5: 2
Chapter 6: 1
Chapter 7: 0
Chapter 8: 2
Chapter 9: 1
Chapter 10: 1
Chapter 11: 1
Chapter 12: 2
Chapter 13: 1
Chapter 14: 1
Chapter 15: 0
Chapter 16: 2
Chapter 17: 2
Chapter 18: 0
Chapter 19: 2
Chapter 20: 1
Chapter 21: 1
Total: 23
Average: 1.1 per chapter
So ya
That's interesting I guess
Basically I still need to quit using suddenly but I'm getting better
Bye
