The Gate To Heaven

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I slowly opened my eyes. The world was spinning. As I got up I felt pain. My vision slowly went back to normal and I saw Olives dad on the ground with his eyes closed and I hoped he was dead! People surrounded me. Olive was on the ground still passed out. I screamed out but only a little sound came out saying, "do not let that man go! Call the police." A young women asked me "what happened you look awful." I looked down at Olive and ignored her question. "Oh my gosh Olive! Is she breathing?" I fell to my knees and felt her heart. It was slowly but barely pounding. "Call an ambulance! She is barely breathing!" The women pulled out her phone and I started to get dizzy. All of a sudden everything went dark. I saw my teacher. I saw Olive sitting beside me. "Stay awake Natalie!" Said my teacher. Then I was at lunch and Olive was talking about the sleepover we were going to have. I gasped and screamed "no!"
"Natalie, Natalie, stay with us, She's stopped breathing!"
"Olive, I'm sorry" I said
"It's ok we will be in a better place now, together, forever."
Me and Olive left school and started walking to a big gate. The gate was beautiful and so so bright. As I moved closer the pain started to fade away. Olive opened the gate and said "you first Natalie" As I walked closer I felt something pull on my arm and then everything went black again. I opened my eyes and saw multiple people standing around me. I looked around and saw an ambulance. I was in an ambulance. "Yes! Natalie you need to breath okay? Stay with us," said one of the people in white. I couldn't move. I was in too much pain. "Wheres Olive?" I asked. "No don't speak! Just focus on breathing." Said another person in white. I closed my eyes again and it went dark. I was next to Olive in front of the gate. Olive couldn't see me. Olive started to open the gate. "No! Don't leave me here Olive!" She couldn't hear me either. I ran and grabbed her just before she walked threw the gate. I pulled her back and we both sat there on the ground. "I'm in too much pain I need to go Natalie," she said
"You are giving your dad what he wanted if you die!"
"Maybe this is what I want too" I started to slap her saying, "wake up, wake up, oh wake up! God don't let her leave me!" She started crying and disappeared.

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