The Artist's Wife by @lola12033

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Review number seven for lola12033

Book Name: The Artist's Wife
Chapters Read: Three
Genre: Romance
Fandom: None

Book Cover:

May God bless your soul. Your book cover is chic and very clear. I have eye problems so I kinda can't see things very clearly but thank you, I didn't need to strain my eyes to see. 8/10

Book Name:

I honestly love it. It's simple but captivating at the same time. Anyone would want to know why its called that. It keeps things laid back and interesting and it's very easy to remember. No one likes a long book name. 8/10

Chapters:

I died. Teach me how to write, please. Can I be your friend? You have so many diverse characters that singlehandedly break every living stereotype. You introduce the flaws of your characters so they aren't portrayed as this perfect group of people. You use cliches in a way that make them fun and realistic. I relate so much to your characters and you have so many funny scenes that I died halfway through. I have never felt such love for a book. The comments give me life, lmao 10/10

Plot:

If you change the plot, imma personally kill you. 9/10

Description:

How you finna describe things so well, though? Like, for real, be my friend. I like how you use metaphors to describe things. Your artistic intelligence is amazing. I feel like its an honour even reviewing your book. 10/10

Grammatical errors/ Paragraphs:

You have a few things to tweak as regards to your spelling errors and paragraph clustering but I'm really busy right now so I can't point it out but I will later. (I did Kylie Jenner nails and I'm finding it hard to type as you will notice some mistakes) 7/10

Overall:

No matter what anyone tells you, never stop writing. You have mad skills, I envy you. And on that note, PLS BE MY FREN!!! Lmao. 10/10

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