Creative Corner Reviews.

His Fragile Flame by @armeiallanes

Review number twelve for armeiallanes

Book Name: His Fragile Flame
Chapters Read: Three plus prologue
Genre: Teen Fiction
Fandom: None

Book Cover:

Your book cover is quite simple and I am unable to tell if that is what you are going for. It's a little bit dark but I like it regardless. It's a picture of a single flame lit on a rose? I apologise, I can't see clearly. My sight issues have gotten worse. Regardless, I really like the simplicity so you get a solid 7/10

Book Name:

I only read your prologue and up until chapter two so I cannot really tell where this name connects with the book but I have a feeling it'll come to light at later chapters and I'd definitely go back and read it to see where. 6/10

Chapters:

To be quiet honest, I'd read your book weeks before you even requested in a book club sort of thing and I absolutely adored. Going back to reread surged the feelings of adoration once again and I was reminded why I loved it in the beginning. It's such great content that is described perfectly. Your prologue begins with action, something that I have a huge bias with. I'm happy you didn't begin the story describing because it certainly would've bored me out. Now, I absolutely adore Araulla's character, maybe even more so than I adore her name. She's fierce and determined and stood strong in the face of her mother. She knows how to play her cards right to get what she wants and I absolutely adore that skill. She's also very capable of feeling like everything is too much which is seen in the prologue so I'm glad she's a strong character with realistic features. I really enjoyed your book, to be quite honest. Your descriptions were spot on and regardless of some mistakes which I pointed out, it's almost perfect. 9/10

Plot:

Unique. That's the one thing I can say about your plot. I haven't read it anywhere else so it makes me want to read it. I was not disappointed when I went through your blurb. 8/10

Description:

As I said before, although your description is scanty in some areas, it's filling most and I enjoyed it. It made me feel a genuine connection and sympathy for your character. So add a bit more scenes in lagging paragraphs and you're good to go. 7/10

Grammatical Errors/ Paragraphs:

I've read through three parts of your book and I've seen minimum grammatical error which is very relieving to see. It makes for a smooth read and I appreciate the effort you make into editing your chapters. Your paragraphs are near and well placed so that each one that comes after the other has meaning. 8/10

Overall:

Your book was quite an interesting read and I'll definitely recommend it to some of my friends. It had mad potential so keep writing. I hope to see more of Araulla in the future. 8/10

REVIEW BY AVA MONTREAL :)