Creative Corner Reviews.

Behind That Mask by @yusrawrites

Review number nine for yusrawrites

Book Name: Behind That Mask
Chapters Read: Three
Genre: Fiction
Fandom: None

Book Cover:

It's pretty amazing yet simple. Not much editing that makes it hard to actually bread the font and that's my favourite type of cover. I like the red for the metallic kinda font and the dark shadow themed mask on the girl's face. Its dark and brooding. 7/10

Book Name:

Book name gives off a kinda depressing vibe and I don't know whether that's intended or not but reading through the book actually made me feel like it was. Behind That Mask, gives me the vibe that someone is going to try to fix a broken person but so far, your chapters have exceeded my expectations.

Chapters:

Dude, mind blown, to be honest. The little poems you added before the chapters and the quotes honestly made me look forward to them. The first paragraph of your first chapter was so intricately detailed, they was hardly any scarcity of mental imagery. I also appreciate the fact that you added real family problems into what was seemingly a perfect household. You had a few mistakes in the first chapter like when you said, 'she frustrated, muttered' instead of, 'she frustratedly muttered' or 'she muttered in frustration' but somebody had already pointed that out. You'll probably notice some into comments where I corrected a few of your other mistakes which will do you good to work on.  Other than those, dude, mind blowing content. You've got precise details which most writers lack these days and the sheer imagery of your description is enough to release a flurry of emotion within the reader which I think is the peak of writing. I think its safe to say, you've mastered the act of Showing and not Telling. 9/10

Plot:

I haven't been introduced to the plot yet because you hardly gave a detailed description where you should've d in just reading along to find out.

Detailing:

I've already pointed this one out. Your details are absolutely amazing, man. You have such amazing skill that people would kill to have. Good luck perfecting it, love! 7/10

Grammatical Errors/ Paragraph:

You use such precise yet glaringly simple English language, it'd be hard for a reader not to get captivated, allured and connected with your characters. Of course, there are a few grammatical flaws but you abide by the Law of Paragraphing and haven't clustered dialogue in every space in a single paragraph which makes for a relieving, smooth read. Correct the spelling errors I have pointed out and you'll be good to go! 7/10

Overall:

Overall, I'd rate your book a solid 8.5/10. Your words flow greatly and you are an amazing writer. Don't ever give up writing. I absolutely enjoyed reading through. I'm sorry your review is so short. I'm exhausted.

REVIEW BY AVA MONTREAL :)