Creative Corner Reviews.

Last Light by @MmTt11

Review number thirteen for MmTt11

Book Name: Last Light
Chapters Read: Three
Genre: Short Story
Fandom: None

Book Cover:

Your book cover is simple but I can't say I don't like it. However, I'd advice you change the font in which your username is written as it kinda makes it a bit messy and put off. Other than that, your font is crystal clear and your image depicts your plots perfectly. 7/10

Book Name:

Last Light; that's not something you hear everyday. I like it. Its very catchy, easy to remember and doesn't stray from the idea of your book. 8/10

Chapters:

Now here's something I'm excited to talk about. Your book drew me in the instant I read it. I could already connect with the characters because you made them very far from perfect. Your introduced Apollo's fears in the very first chapter and I appreciate that. You also have quite a great hook, which I'm sure a lot of people have complimented you about. I also deeply admire the relationship between Apollo and Aunt Jonah, it depicts a real bond that a lot of people can relate with. Also, amazing cliffhangers at the end of the chapter, they keep me craving more. However, your long author notes make the chapters a bit messy so I'd advice to shorten the notes or remove them if at all. 8/10

Plot:

I think its safe to say I have never in all my three years of Wattpad, read a book such as your own with such a uniquely defined plot. You've answered so many of my childhood fantasy questions and that is just amazing. 10/10

Description:

Your blurb of the book is quite short. Intriguing but short as well so I'd advice adding a few more lines to the three that you already have if you want to draw in more readers. 7/10

Grammatical Errors/ Paragraphs:

Now here is where I have a problem. Although your paragraphs are perfectly laid out and assembled, the numerous grammatical errors in most of your chapters put me off completely. Reading your book, I get the impression that English isn't your first language and if it isn't, then you are doing amazing but I will advice you find some one to edit and proofread your chapters so it'll be delectable to the human eye. 6/10

Overall:

Your book was chillingly relatable read and your hooks were way past classical, drawing me in at my first line. I will definitely read more because I want to unfold most of the secrets in your book. I want to know why Aunt Jonah his this entire thing from Apollo and how much of a bigger ordeal this entire thing is. Your book will get recommended to my friends by me and you get a solid 9/10

REVIEW BY AVA MONTREAL :)