AN: I need your help!

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Okay so I know you guys are probably sick of Author's notes but I want your advice on two things.

Before that though I have some explaining to do. I wrote on my profile about how I wasn't able to update any of my stories last weekend and how I probably won't be able to this weekend either. I thought I should explain it on here as well however too as I know not all of you may follow me so you might not have seen that message and I just wanted you to know the reasons for my hiatus ( lol I feel like fallout boy).

So the reason I didn't upadate last weekend was bc I was sick the whole week before and I spent the weekend sleeping and getting caught up on the work I had missed. I might not be able to update this weekend bc I might be going out with my grandma and I also have an essay I need which brings me to the first thing I need your advice on.

So we're suppoosed to have our thesis (basicallly our introductory paragraph) written and approved by the teacher before we can continue doing the rest of the essay. I have my thesis written I'm gonna put it below and I want to know if you guys think it's good. This is for my anthro class btw and we were given a list of like 15 topics we could choose from, one of them being discrimination. I decided to do that and I'm doing homophobia/ heteronormativity and the effects it has on society. Like I said I want to know what you guys think of it. If you think it's good as it is or if I should add more.

Discrimination is still a huge issue in the world today and one of the most notable types of discrimination that still widely exists today is homophobia. This essay will further discuss what homophobia is and the effects it has on LGBTQ individuals. It will also look at the effects Heteronormative society has on members of the LGBTQ community. It will also discuss how the combonation of both homophobia and heteronromativity affect not only LGBTQ members, but all memebers of society.

So like I said feedback on that would be much appreciated.

The second thing I need advice on is actually for this story. I was thinking of adding a love interest for Luke (besides Ash ofc). I'm still working out how they'll fit in with the story and I have a pretty good idea and I defiinitely know how they'll affect Luke. I'm thinking of Daniel Sharman to play him and if you guys like the idea I think I'll introduce him in the next chapter. So what do you guys think of that?

Ofc there will be lashton in the end but this will be a good way to get to know the more hesitant side of Luke since he trusts Ashton so quickly. It also adds more conflict to the story than just overprotective Harry and bitchy Amy. So I probably will end up adding him but I stil wanted your opinion first.

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