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Review: It was a great historical romance book! Alexandria aka Allie gave away her life for the sake of saving her village. The cruel king wanted to destroy her village for not paying the levi and tax. The girl was taken to the king who found interest in her and thus she became his personal maid. And after that her relationship with him progressed. Your style of writing and way of explaining is all the way awesome! You didn't make much grammatical errors too. And every chapter was really detailed. The quick tip is to write the last line with a unique way to peak one's interested and you did pretty well there! I had an amazing time reading it!
Review: A awesome badass romance! I'm honored to have read such a good romance book! The boy is a gang leader and the girl is a really feisty one. I insanely liked both of the characters from the start! Claire gets involved with the infamous gangster Danny. She just wakes up to find herself in his room while he was on the shower. Pulling the odd ones out, she yells and hastily takes her leave. But by time Danny and Claire start to like each other. But the plot twist about the girl was ahem, beyond surprising! Their were less to no grammatical faults and your choice of words were amazing! Although there were characters almost coming outta the blue but above all the fiction is remarkable!
Review: Your cover and title is the first thing that peaked my interest. It's also really nice that you had a beautiful opening video to greet the readers! Yep attracting indeed. Your story pace was also perfect. The way you described made me feel the emotions and I felt getting myself more and more intrigued to read. And you almost didn't make any grammatical mistake at all! I was totally engrossed in reading the book!
Review: It's another good plot I had the pleasure of reading! It's a beautiful story starting with Ryan and Taylor loving each other. This is a progressing story so I still don't know where it's headed. So far your twist ad been amazing! The person Taylor had cheated with turned out to be the guy Ryan had fallen for. Your story seemed rushed. You need not quicken it like that, try to convey Ryan's emotions too. You described well albeit it was rushed. And work with your grammars too. It will make the already nice story smoother and more vivid. You have a good potential. It's just minimal things you need to fix. I know you can do even better!
