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Review: I loved your first chapter, you got me hooked right from the beginning. The descriptions, Fireblaze's character development, and the memory experiment were all great. I especially liked the bit at the end when Ether chooses not to say anything about the color changes in her memory. I loved your ideas and the plot as well. Nice use of description and language, good character development as well. You did have some errors in your work though, but other than that it's a great story. You were good at adding suspense and captivating readers. I really enjoyed reading your work.
Review: I love your book! From the first chapter, it got me hooked. I love the way you described all your characters and how you show her feelings. We can't all be perfect though. There are some places you tell not show and you sometimes give too much or too little information. Your cover doesn't quite match the concept of the book and your blurb should be improved as it plays an important part in grabbing the attention of readers. Most of the time, you ignored punctuation marks and those only confused me, I had to go back to read it. There are also some places you don't describe the characters well. Always reread before updating, it will really help. If you improve on these, I'm sure you'll become a paid author in no time.
