We are thankful to each and every one of you that participated in our Contest! Do not be de-motivated if you're not a winner, for life gives a lot of opportunities and this is not the end! If not now, you will someday and we look forward to it. <3
WINNERS
1 PLACE:-
Username: NetThompson
Book Title: In The Deepest Depth
Cover= 10/10= Beautiful and so expressive! Great cover, especially for poetry!
Blurb= 9/10= Nice job, especially with the section that was almost a glimpse into your talent. Also, congrats on the other wins!
Style= 9/10
Word choice= 19/20= Kept getting better as the chapters kept going!
Language= 20/20
Description= 10/10
First chapter= 9/10= Word choice got better in the later chapters but it made me want to keep going.
Enjoyment= 10/10= Loved every second and every line I read!
Total= 96/100
Review= First off, you should start a graphic shop if you made your cover! Aside from that, your poetry had me feeling your emotions, and it opened up perspectives for me. Amazing words, and please continue to write!
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2 PLACE:-
Username: Nyctophile_03
Book Title: Untitled
Cover= 9/10= Beautiful art, just maybe have a title next time!
Blurb= 9/10= Descriptive and makes me want to read, the inclusion of different fonts was nice.
Style= 9/10= Good, I love that you included graphics and photos.
Choice of Words= 18/20
Language= 17/20= Vocabulary isn't too advanced, but you still find a way to make the poems flow.
First chapter= 9/10= Made me want to keep going
Description= 8/10= Fairly descriptive the whole time
Enjoyment= 9/10 Total= 87/100
Review= First off, if the art of the cover is yours, you have an amazing talent! You know how to write as well, especially when it comes to making readers want to keep going! Word choice and language are important, and you did well on those things. Nice work!
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3 PLACE:
Username: AmnaHaseeb
Book Title: Crescent Diary
Cover= 6/10= Like the title created imagery in my head, the cover was a bit plain, but not bad
Blurb= 8/10= Not bad, on the shorter side with errors in punctuation at times. (There shouldn't be gaps between words and commas or periods.)
Style= 9/10= I am a fan of the way the words move, which has gripped me since the beginning
Choice of Words= 18/20 For the most part, word choice is good, but in some spots, another word may fit better.
Language= 18/20= Like word choice, for the most part, it was exceptional
First chapter= 9/10= gripped me and made me want to continue.
Description= 10/10= Made me visualize everything
Enjoyment= 9/10= Slight revisions could make this book of poetry even better! Total= 86/100
Review= This book of poetry really opened up and showed me your emotion, which I loved! For the most part, your word choice really made your work amazing! My only negative feedback would be to remember that there is no space needed between a word and a period or comma, but that's nitpicking. Great work!
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Mystical May Contest
De Todo"Don't tell me the moon is shining, show me the glint of light on a broken glass~" Open: ✖ Closed: ✔ Every month, a contest will be hosted by our fellow admins! With new styles and catchy themes, we hope to keep you entertained! If you are an aspir...
