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Judges:-
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WINNERS
1 Place:-
Username: Sassy_Fangirl
Book Title: Cupid's Rhombus
Total: 94
Review: Your book cover is awesome. Nice blurb and description. The first chapter was very good because it made things interesting. The rhythm of the book is absolutely perfect. The characters are described perfectly and their development is also gradual. The chapters are not too short and not too long to make it seem boring. The sassy-ness of the protagonist makes the book more fun to read. As the story goes on, it makes things more interesting and unique. The author has used some lines which are so amazing. All to all I enjoyed this book and gradually this book will get lots and lots of recognition.
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2 Place:-
Username: LeiAndre
Title: DITCH
Total: 88
Review: It's a really fantastic book! Ave, the mc of the book, has a very unique personality and traits that most don't have. Even if she's associated with high status, she never bothers to act as one. She never wants to be punctual in school but if it's coffee, then count her in! Besides she holds a rebellious attitude that I loved! Your description is perfect and your pace is amazing too. And almost no grammatical errors! I loved your cover too. I absolutely had a great time reading this! You're definitely gonna get lots of appreciation for this.
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3 Place:-
Username: ilickcupcakes
Title: Pistachio Girl
Total: 72
Review: Your first chapter confused me. I had to read that intently to figure it out. The main character saw a strange dream but you could've explained it more humorously and make each part of it a bit short too. Your name of the book is interesting. The girl loves food especially pistachio flavored ice-cream. Besides, her side of humor was nice. But if I am honest here, your story slightly lacks in detail. I felt like it needs a different use of words and terms to make it a lot more amusing. But you definitely did a great job writing this! If your details are well defined then the book would get much more appreciation.
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Honorable Mention:
Username: thejadelover
Title: Frenemies Forever
Total: 70
Review: This is quite an interesting book. Mallika, an average normal student, was lucky enough to get an admission in a renowned dance school in Paris. Tres Bien (Very well!) Her determination was praiseworthy. But with her head-start of creating a beautiful career, she had to face drawbacks. Your description had been written pleasingly. The character's personality was attractive too. Even so, you lacked in few places. Your writing style would've been better if you hadn't written it in haste. There had been grammatical and spelling errors too. Not to mention those were eye-catchy. I think if you read it through, you'll be able to fix them. Besides, make the length of chapters average, yours were a bit short. It will make it more appreciating. Good luck!
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Exception: We figured your book was actually a comic and got judged. So, here are your results! We apologize you cannot achieve any position in this Contest. However, your work was greatly appreciated!
Username: theashesofthephoenix
Title: Loving Too Much To...Kill!
Total: 85
Review: The best of the humor genre I've read so far! It's a comic strip thus there wasn't any grammatical error. Piccolo falls in love with Picola but Picolo (and his parents) hates animals but Picola loves them. She even had two kitties that Piccolo despised them. Still, him being Piccolo, he did mock her that he'd cook them! But their relationship was based on Picola being unnerved by worldly things and Picolo loving that about her. The choice of words is amazing enough. Especially every ending line. I honestly never laughed more at almost every end! It was also based on the real-life situations among spouses of couples bringing out the fun in their lives. I'm truly amazed at your sense of humor! Definitely worth a read!
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PARTICIPANTS
Username: cutiepie04
Title: Endless Melody
Total: 53
Review: I love your book! I loved your plot and your characters. The character development is good and the language in which it was written was good. The pronunciation is not good at all. (E.g, separated for separated.) You don't capitalize proper nouns (e.g. Kylee, nick). You can use the left alignment to write her chapters than in center alignment which will make the story look good.You should write what the character thinks normally like "He is arrogant too", I thought. instead of writing those sentences in bold letters.You can use words like "ahem" or like add some words which will make the dialogue look more proper. (e.g. "And the cherry on cake ahem a certain jerk boy making the appearance of his arrogant self is not helping either.")The chapters lacked the depth of emotions in some places. The story was going too quick and normal is some...I would suggest to make it to a normal pace/rhythm. I am seeing a lot of grammatical mistakes, you can just re-read before publishing that chapter. You should also show not tell. Most of the time, in some places you're telling "I am sad" but when you can show it. The cover is good, but it doesn't fit into the book. If you focus on these little things you can do wonders!
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Username: mia-carmen
Title: An UnFURtunate Kiss
Total: 68
Review: I love your book! It has a very very unique plot that I grew to love as I went on with the chapters. Your writing style is elegant which is good and had no punctuation mistakes which makes it much better to read. I loved the protagonist aka Lila's way of thinking! It makes the book humourous which is rare to find in humor genre (as much I have read). I didn't like your cover because I felt like it didn't suit the book. Also, I found something that you should correct- it's the scenes...like I couldn't notice when Lila came back from the gala and started puking her guts out. You should put some indications there. Your pace is good and I loved your characters. I would suggest you put a small blurb to make the book better.All to all, I had a fun time reading your book and it will get appreciation much more than you think for its quirky writing and amazing wits of the protagonist!
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Username: chingugirls
Title: Chingu Love
Total: 67
Review: Okay it's the most... different type of mature book I've ever read. Your story is humorous and unlike anything I've ever encountered. To be honest, I am cringed reading the first part of the first chapter. Chingu had really unnatural and weird behaviors. So, I couldn't fathom whether I should appreciate it or not. Besides, it's best if you translate the sentence you wrote in a different language so that the readers understand. You described quite nicely. Moreover, it was nice to see the right use of words and metaphors. If one wants to read an unalike book, one can read this one. But I'd warn you to read at your own risk to be precise.
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