Should I do a rewrite of this book?
Before you answer please read what I have to say.
I realized that this book is extremely confusing, chapters are less than 400-600 words, and this book is like a roller coaster.
I also think it would be more helpful to have Haylee's parents more involved in the story, and I could explain more about their illness. The parents were only ever mentioned once, and the illness they had was never explained.
I also wanted to further show how the Alpha treated Haylee since she was the only child of his Third in Command and a girl. Explain his hatred towards females taking over the Alpha, Beta, Third in Command, and Pack General title. And also show more of his relationship with his sons. And the reason it went downhill.
Please consider, and help me decide. Would it be worth it? Would you read the rewritten version? Please let me know in the comments.
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My Best Friends' Alpha is My Mate!
WerewolfCOMPLETE REWRITE is out, but currently not completed. "What do you think about our Alpha?" Gina asked me. My eyes stayed glued on the Alpha that was talking to my Alphas. His head tilted and cought eye contact with me. My heart beated quick in my c...
