Review on Tears' curse by LindaLsc
(Sorry, my wattpad is having some problems, I haven't been able to upload the cover of your book, that's what cause the delay in publishing, I will edit this, once it's started working.)
This tells the story of a dragon sent to protect the mortal world. She learns the truth behind her birth. Will Miracle be able to complete the mission in the world of immortality without using her powers. This is the right thrilling fantasy to add to your library.
COVER 📘
Your cover is nice enough, but it needs more work, it doesn't really depict that fantasy look that I expected. Also, the font used in writing the author's name was so tiny, I couldn't even see it very well, so you could work on this again.
TITLE 📘
Your title is really intriguing I didn't understand why you choose the title for your book. I didn't see it relating to any side of your blurb or the part I read, so please feel free to explain this to me.
BLURB 📘
Ok, all I have to say is beautiful, seriously, beautiful.
From your first paragraph you got me hooked, and I don't get hooked easily 😂😂 ok, enough laughing.
Your blurb was written beautiful, every word of it was spicy, maybe too spicy 😂 good work on this.
PUNCTUATION/GRAMMER 📘
Same thing goes with your description, amazing!!
If you asked me to talk on this, I would just start saying how beautiful it is *double sniff*. I like the fact that your readers will be able to read your work smoothly without any form of confusion over wrong spellings or grammer, and your punctuation gives perfect clarity, good work.
DESCRIPTION 📘
So whenever I see someone with perfect description I offer them a kiss, take two 😙😙
This was amazing, right from the start, like seriously your description is really beautiful, I can't even summon the words to describe how good they were. Great work on this.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT 📘
To be honest, I kind of got confused with in the chapter one of your book, not with the book itself but the names, but going further in chapter two, it got better and I was able to flow with them in the four chapters I read.
It's got better along the way and it was your description that helped greatly to this. Seriously, it helped a great deal. Keep it up.
OVERALL IMPRESSION 📘
So well, I guess you know what I would say here, it's what I have kind of been saying from the beginning. I am not actually someone that reads fantasy books, though I am trying to explore it because I plan on writing one. But you were able to get me interested in your work.
Work on your book covers, because not everyone believes in not judging a book by its cover, a good book like yours deserves a more attractive cover, keep it up.
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This review is to help you and nothing more, wishing you the best.
