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REVIEW ON NOT YOUR REGULAR BY TEMMYTgirl

Review of Not Your Regular by TemmyTgirl

This book takes you through the journey of Steve and Linda as they narrate how their love life came to be, taking the readers along with them.

COVER 📘

Your cover is nice. It isn't filled with lots of bright colors that some author's used to catch readers attention, it was a plain color and was also beautiful. The font choice was nice, nicely showing the title and author's name.

TITLE 📘

I like the title you choose for your book, at first I was like...

"Not your Regular?"

...but while reading the first four chapters of your book, I understand while you choose that. You were talking about how the love relationship between Linda and Steve didn't go around like how many other relationships came to be, nice title choice.

BLURB 📘

Now, in your blurb I think you should write a bit more of what the story entails rather than just a scene you picked out from the book. Yes, the scene is beautiful and draws readers in, but I feel a blurb should be more than that, a blurb is the short— yet descriptive account of the book that goes on the back cover.

Every blurb should have a primary conflict, your primary conflict is what draws your readers, intrigues them to want to scroll through those pages of your book. Your blurb is what shows your readers that this particular book is for them.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMER 📘

Firstly, I will have to commend you on your grammar, good job girl. The four chapters I read I hardly saw any grammatical errors. If there were any, they should be few and I hardly noticed.

Although there were words like

His face seemed rather familiar when I had seen him.

I don't think the word rather is necessary there. It could be written

Now wonder his face seemed familiar when I saw him earlier.

Or where you said

The one who grabbed my waist.