REVIEW ON CONVENANT BY SISOFTHEDEVILS

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Review on CONVENANT By sisofthedevils

This book takes you through the life of Senora Gibson, as her life takes a huge turn after her elder brother gets to know she will be the heir to their parent's empire

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This book takes you through the life of Senora Gibson, as her life takes a huge turn after her elder brother gets to know she will be the heir to their parent's empire.

COVER 📘

Your cover is nice but will need a little touching. If I was scrolling past wattpad on a normal day, I may not give your book a second glance because your cover didn't win my attention. Sure it is a good story and all, but the cover is what draws the readers in. Also, no need to write @ before the author's name on your book cover.

A good book cover attract readers. It has to relate to the book in such a way that it grabs readers and inspires them to investigate further. To make a good book cover one has to think like a reader and not a writer. Put yourself in the shoes of a reader and ask, would I read this book, judging on the cover.

TITLE 📘

We have titles based off characters.
We have titles based off plots.
People also go for complex title.

Whatever the way you choose to name your book, it always has to be related. Also, like the cover book titles attract readers.

Convenant.

CONVENANT

This doesn't hold any drama, or suspence or anything that can catch my attention. I read your blurb and with what you wrote there, I think you could come up with something better.

The Inheritance
Family Feud
Bad Blood

This three titles I just mentioned also matches with the plot of your story. I am not saying you should use the titles I picked out. But with this tips and an even better book cover you will attract more readers to your book.

BLURB 📘

Your blurb was carefully detailed. I like how the first paragraph was enough to keep me reading and wanting to uncover more. Now the first two paragraph of your blurb was nice, but the last two got me confused, the place you wrote about WRECKERS and a Adrain Campbell could use a little touch, probably, you should rewrite that part again. Your first two paragraph and the last line was what drew me in and I suspect will draw other readers in too.

The tip to writing a good blurb is giving a reader what they want and starting with a hook. Once your first, second sentence or short paragraph doesn't grab them, they lose interest. You should always start your blurb with that hook to hold them.

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