ok so people seem to like my story a little. To those of you on board with this ,thanks for the support.it would still help if you could give me writing advice. Thanks again .
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( previously )
" whats this? Is it for me?" I said in my best baby voice.He just stood ther with a smirk on his face.
"I dont know. Maybe you should check it out for yourself! He said as he pulled out a nicely wrapped pink box with a white ribbon around it.
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I started Unwraping the pink paper.mom walked in and hugged luke. Then she got out her phone and took a picture of me. Apparently she thought it was "cute!" But it was normal on a birthday i guess.
"Hurry up! Come on i wanna see what you got !" She said hopping up and down like a freaking 2 year old. I swear she was just saying how immature I am just a few days ago.
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(Lukes P.O.V)
i watched anna as she opened the gift slowly. After a few seconds of waiting, she finally opened the box her face lit up instantly.
" oh my god! " She screamed, holding up the sketch book and pencils that i got for her. All I could do was smile as she hugged me. For some reason, I never wanted the hug to end.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A/N: So I took some of you guys's advice and i hope it got better but if it didn't im sorry. Annnnnyyyywayyyy cyaaaa;)
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Fanfictionanna always thought her best friend luke was just her friend but will all of that change when his band goes on tour?will the problems hold them back on their way or will they both make it out together? find out in unofficially official.
