"Don't judge the book by its cover"
"The blurb doesn't matter it's only the inner part of the story"
~ common phrases most of us have maybe got in our mind.
And yet somehow before a reader adds a book to their library, its the cover, title and blu...
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Title This title is definitely unique and different. From the title itself, I can tell it's about gender equality. It's a very important topic that you have chosen. Hat's off to you for that.
Cover The cover is cool but a lot is going on. I can see the name of the book but no Author's name. As well as the graphic designer's name if someone else has made it for you. I would change the cover so that the fonts of the author and graphics designer are more visible but otherwise the cover is really awesome.
Blurb The burb is a bit too long for my liking. It didn't give me the excitement to tap on the read button. You need to write something short and crisp to make readers want to read the story.
Some minor errors, you'll see when you reread the blurb.
I found a few sentences, which caught my eyes immediately and I couldn't stop myself in changing them and should be done immediately by you!
Sentence 1: But is it true in a marriage relationship?
My correction: But is it true in a marriage?
Or
But is it true in a relationship?
You cannot have the word marriage and relationship in the same sentence as it's a synonymous for each other.
Sentence 2: Does the contribution and sacrifice of both husband and wife is in equal amount?
My correction: Are both husband and wife equal in contributing and sacrificing for their relationship?
Sentence 3: Here the fault is not of the husband all the time but of the loving and caring nature of wife.
My version: It's not always the husband's fault because of the caring and loving nature of the wife.
Sentence 4: Read on the story to experience the thrilling and beautiful journey.
My version: Do read the story to experience the thrilling yet beautiful journey.
Now you are good to go✨
Overall impression My overall impression of the book was good. I'd recommend this story to the KaiRa readers.
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