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Author: withbeautifulwings
Ranker: AS

Author: withbeautifulwingsRanker: AS

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Title
I have never read such a title before. For me, it isn't attractive either since I connect a fairy tale love story with this. It seems to be unique but if you read stories, then you can find this term all over again and again. Maybe you could find something specific to the story and something more unique and attractive.

Cover
Your cover is simple but I think the font matches too much with the background. Since you optioned for a simple background, you could opt for a more visible font. Maybe you could give a new try to that one.

Blurb
You have a two-sentence blurb which portrays a normal love story. In the end, you wrote that it's in the form of a diary. The blurb needs to be as detailed and mysterious, as possible. This part will decide whether the reader will read or skip as the last decision. You failed at this part since your plot doesn't seem to be unique or attractive. There are no questions, no mysteries. Maybe you could try it again.

Overall expression
I am sorry but I would not read this story. From the title to the blurb, everything needs to be redone by you to make it attractive and make it seem better. Possibly you could try it again.

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