"Don't judge the book by its cover"
"The blurb doesn't matter it's only the inner part of the story"
~ common phrases most of us have maybe got in our mind.
And yet somehow before a reader adds a book to their library, its the cover, title and blu...
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Title Your title is unique but really long. I am not a Mahabharat fan and can't associate much with the title. After reading it I am not sure which language your book is in. One thing I liked in your long title is the alliteration present there. It has something in it which is quite attractive but the long title itself isn't looking that nice. Maybe you could try to shorten your title a bit so that it's more attractive.
Cover I love the adjustment of the woman in the mid of the cover. The background seems really nice as well but I think you could change the title a bit. It's very simple and the glitch isn't looking nice in it. Maybe you could try a fancy but white font. Also the "A saga of love" is slightly matching with the dark background. When you will be changing it then add your name to the cover. Other than that I don't find anything needed to change.
Blurb In the very first sentence, grammar mistakes are to be seen. There are almost no punctuation marks present in the blurb. Instead of a question mark, you used a dot. Other than that, your blurb is really short. You portray the main situation of the present story and you also keep questions to hook up your readers in the end. But maybe a short monolog of the woman could probably help you more to make your blurb even better.
Overall expression I am in two minds. Some things are really interesting about your story's outlook like the cover and the present situation but the blurb in all and the title are not that interesting for me. I am more in the tendency to not read it. The change in the title and blurb would make me feel more attracted to your story.
