"Don't judge the book by its cover"
"The blurb doesn't matter it's only the inner part of the story"
~ common phrases most of us have maybe got in our mind.
And yet somehow before a reader adds a book to their library, its the cover, title and blu...
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Hola, I’m here to rank your book to help you out. I hope I’m not too rude while doing so and if you have any questions feel free to DM me.
Title
The title seems very common. So you could use a synonym for imperfect like for example: Their Faulty Love
Or: Their Insufficient Love
To make it more interesting for a reader to tap the read button.
Cover
Damm the cover is giving me chills especially the quote, ”A story where so many feelings went unsaid...”
This one sentence wants to make me read the story. How the characters come alive from the background is a masterpiece. The black and white fonts match the cover, well done.
But the author’s name is not visible for me, which is a minus point.
Blurb
The blurb is interesting. A bit long as you are introducing the two main protagonists. And I found some major mistakes that are not helping me in tapping the read button.
Your version 1: What happens when two are forced together when they are never meant to be.
My correction 1: What happens when two people are forced to be together? When they are never meant to be?
Your version 2: Meet Radhika Chandra. She studies in Oakville with her childhood bestie, Kavya for fashion designing.
My correction 2: Meet Radhika Chandra, who studies fashion designing alongside her childhood best friend Kavya in Oakville.
One question what do you mean by, ”Everything is doing fair.”?
You have to go through the blurb and make necessary changes as well as shorten it!
Overall impression
On the plus side is the cover.
The minuses are the title and blurb. So I’m in between of deciding of wanting to read and not wanting to.
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