🐈𝑯𝒊𝒔 𝑰𝒏𝒄𝒐𝒏𝒗𝒆𝒏𝒊𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝑩𝒓𝒊𝒅𝒆🐈

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Deliverer: AS
Author: akiimarvelous

Deliverer: ASAuthor: akiimarvelous

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Title
Your title is unique and nice. I don't have an idea what it refers to but to know that I would peek inside to read it. I would love to know why the adjective "Inconvenient" is present there. At one side it seems hilarious and on the other side, it's horrific. Hopefully, I will be positively surprised by the blurb.

Cover
Your cover gives horror and mystery vibes. The background and title on top are perfect. Nothing I could ask you to change there since it's attractive and simple. The quote could be changed up since it's not properly readable from the right side. And then I have two things which I do not really like in the cover. What's it with the "Tutul" and with the sign/logo on bottom left? They don't really suit along with the whole. The "Tutul" is almost as big as the title which makes it look out of place.

Blurb
I think perfect would suit the best here. You gave a one-sentence summary at the beginning followed by a proper mention of the situation just below that. The grammar is on point and you don't give away everything about the story. You don't reveal the mystery of the title, in fact, you add more mystery through the blurb. What are the problems between them? What happened in the past? Will they actually get closer? Who's the serial killer? Why exactly this title? - Do the problem have something to do from Akanksha's side?

Overall expression
Me, being a mystery lover, would love to jump into this story. It has mystery and suspense throughout. I love the way you took care of small things like grammar even inside your blurb which many people just ignore. Spot me in the upcoming week by reading your story in case I got time. But you won't actually realize that I read it since you will have to figure out my private account for that.

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