Dramatic Entrance

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Villain!Deku, DabiDeku, Villain rehabilitation
Not Fem!Deku
Ok grammar
I don't put commas in the correct place and I don't start new paragraphs when I'm supposed to
Like usual, awkward in the beginning but gets better after that
"I am concerned about your inability to Care"
"I learned from the best, nonchalant anime characters and cats"
This is a longer chapter almost 2000 words (this is from atf author btw) and the storyline isn't finished so I'm definitely going to split this one up
Most of the beginning isn't well written, I don't know how to fix it, sorry
Summary
Deku, Dabi, and Toga get caught by the hero's and are forced to join their rehabilitation program. They are allowed to make requests.

It is all 3rd person after the first paragraph
Deku/Izu = Bunny
Good luck

Of course, Toga had to stay back to gather blood. She already filled two giant syringes but 'They all need to be filled, Bunny', so we had to wait for her to finish and hope the hero's wouldn't find us. But luck wasn't on our side today, and Eraser came right around the corner at the exact moment that she finished collecting. He threw his capture scarf at Bunny, one of the few villains known to incapacitate their targets instead of killing them, though the detectives never figured out how because he never came in contact with his targets and it didn't have the correct signs to relate it to a quirk, as the evidence was a small puncture wound on the neck or arms. (As you can see I'm not the best at introducing characters and info, sorry)

Bunny, or Izuku Midoriya, was small and slender, only measuring 5'2. His villain costume consisted of a royal green suit vest with a light blue shirt underneath, and his name, Bunny, came from the Bunny ears that always clashed with his outfit. Usually green or white, on a headband, was a pair of half realistic Bunny ears, and on the few occasions he wasn't wearing the realistic ears he wore a Bunny mask with LEDs lining the edges. The name also came from the reports that when his voice changer wasn't in use it would sometimes glitch and make a sound similar to a rabbit, and it would be adorable if he wasn't such a popular villain.

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