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📌Book name :- Instagramming my boss 📌Author's name:-prishamanchanda28 📌Reviewer's name:-ENCHANTEDmajor 📌Chapters:- 7 📌Genre:- Fanfiction •••• 📜Summary:- 📜 The book revolves around a boss and an employee. The female protagonist to be the employee and male role be the CEO. She stalks his boss first on Instagram and mistakenly likes his picture which now made her anxious with what his boss would think when finds out she secretly admiring and stalking him. This is when Rakshit asks for her instagram id and then become friends online. Jealously spins up as they realize their love for each other.
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📌First impression:- The story appeared to be a simple online love story. Monotonous though, but its good.
📌Cover:- Cover needs to be improved
📌Title:- Title of the book is nice. Its best suited for the book. Yet please work on the cover.
📌Description:- The plot is cliche type. Description needs a lot of work. There are dialogues which you need to use quotation marks for. You do not describe scenarios or whatever the situation is. Its a book you should give details about everything so that people have a clear idea about what is happened. Your book does not sound like a book, its too informal. With jokes and all where you tag others. Work on that too.
📌Plot:- The plot is I cant decide a cliche or non cliche. This is because, its the first time I am reading such a story but at the same time, I have heard such sorts on wattpad. Plot is great. I mean storyline, but simply a plot cant make a book great. Make the chapters a little longer and then make your book more formal. It rather feels like a slam book than an actual book.
📌Character development:- Since its the beginning of the book the character development is not seen that clearly but when later in chapters you should work upon it and give it more attention. Protagonist are the link between your book and your reader and when you ace it, then readers develop a connection and hook up with the book.
📌Writing style:- You need to work on the writing skill. You write words causally. You don't write it in the form of dialogue. Instead like script. You should describe their expressions in a more elaborate yet precise manner. Your writing skill is something,I felt needs major improvement specially the dialogues.
Suggestions :- Your writing style needs improvement. You should start using new words to avoid repetition of same words. Start using quotation marks instead of writing it in a form of script. Make the way you write a little less casual as when something is way too much in quantity, it ruins everything. If you write POV's then mention that you are writing a POV. That helps readers to distinguish between what's happening. Work on the description as well.
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Date :12.11.20
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