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📌Book name :- Abducted by a stranger 📌Author's name:-prishamanchanda28 📌Reviewer's name:-ENCHANTEDmajor 📌Chapters:-6 Genre:- Romance/Fanfiction
📜Summary:- 📜 The book revolves a single dad with a two year old daughter of his brother who was murdered and now he was the only one left to pamper the little girl Navya. He was broke since his father was a malefactor accused of the reason of looting middle grade people and that also the reason for his wife's suicide. In a flicker of time their entire reputation turned upside down and now people even loathed to see the shadow of Chetan Shergill's son, Rakshit who had no job cause of his father's sin and that his condition was becoming more and more gloomy each passing day. It was when someone lent him the contact of kidnapping the leading writer Drishti, her college friend who he bullied once but later became friends.
Review 📝
📌First impression:- The story interesting. Non cliche plot.
📌Cover:- Cover needs to be improved
📌Title:- Title of the book is nice. Its best suited for the book. Yet please work on the cover.
📌Plot:- The plot is good. Its nice and decent. Non cliche and a unique idea. The plot should be executed perfectly to have a good book. Its not like those books where baseless romance brims. I think this plot carries twists and turns which would be later revealed in chapters.
📌Description:- Work on description as you can describe it even better. Blurb needs to be more attractive since it is what gains reader's attention and if it is attractive then it can catch or hookup readers easily. You have a simple way of writing which is good but then there are places where readers would want more explanation to interpret what's happening cause in a book we create pictures by reading and if you can describe more the picture about your book in your reader's will be more clear.
📌Character development:-I loved Rakshit and his baground. A single dad. His family was an obstruction that did not let him live his future. No job cause of his father's scam made people have an opinion about him. A businessman's son particularly in a broke condition is intriguing. Then about Drishti, what I found interesting was Rakshit and Drishti Drishti knowing each other since college and that he even bullied her but then latter became friends. Characters hold deep emotions within them. Since only 6 chapters so far this is what has been revealed.
📌Writing style:- Your writing style is nice. Its decent. Use quotation marks properly. Between two dialogues leave a line.
Suggestions :-
•Work on the book cover. Since it needs major improvement. •There are little grammatical errors that you need to correct. The dialogues that you write have to be properly enclosed within inverted commas. •Leave a line after each upcomming dialogue. • Describe a little more. • Work on blurb and make it more attractive.
Date:19.11.20
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