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Summary📜 Sudiksha, a 20 year girl who was ready to become a nun, agreed to marry Abhay in hope of starting a family. But her life turns into a tragedy when Abhi dies and she ends up marrying his brother Abhinav. Abhinav did not understand her and her silence. He abandons her and moves to another city. But after two years of marriage, the lives of Sudiksha and Abhinav take a turn and they come under one roof after Abhinav‘s mother's funeral. Abhinav who already loved Sudhiksha but could never express and Sudhiksha who was too shy to accept that she craved love and togetherness with him. But as their misunderstanding gets clear they start moving close to each other to find the love they were in search of.
Review 📝
📌Cover: Beautiful but i feel that it can be made more attractive by changing fonts.
📌Title: perfect and Completely matches the story. It's simple but apt to the story line.
📌Blurb: Blurb can be made more interesting to add the curiosity factor of readers by adding some dialogues from the story.
📌Grammar: you have a wonderful hold on grammar and every chapter is thoroughly edited and proofread, thus there are no typos or punctuation errors. There are just one or two places where Sudhiksha’s name is spelled wrong. Overall impression: i loved the book and its story. The plot is unique and creative. Flow of the story is great and it's overall a good read. You have wonderful hold on grammar so there is no break in language. I am definitely saving this book to my library to enjoy the further updates.
Suggestions:
*Work on character development and its description So that we can imagine how a character looks and completely connect to the emotions of characters.
*Use italic or bold font to write the dialogues, it will make the presentation beautiful and easy.
*I would suggest increasing the length of chapters.
*Words are repeated a lot, like ‘reassured’ have been used many times in every chapter.
Would you recommend others to read it: Yes! Of course. It is a unique plot and lovely read.
Date:20.11.20
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