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📌Book name :- For my Country 📌Author's name:-Kaira_reader3104 📌Reviewer's name:-ENCHANTEDmajor 📌Chapters:-1 📌Genre:- General fiction
Summary:- 📜 The book contemplates a martyr's wife and her heartfelt emotions as she misses her husband terribly. His promise that rings in her ears ' Vada krta hu hum baby ka welcome saath me krenge' which he failed to complete. She was still not able to overcome the trauma and pain of losing her husband. Her sorrows gradually became tears of conceit as she raised her son, who was like the exact incarnation of her husband. She raised him telling the bravery of his father. That he should respect and take pride in being a soldier.
Review 📝
📌First impression:- The story interesting. Definitely though provoking and reminisces us of our duty towards the soldiers. That we should respect them. It tells us about the emotion that we feel when we lose someone special and how difficult it is to move on. It depicts the feeling of a wife, a son and a woman's feelings. It shows the responsibility, country love and commitment of a soldier towards its motherland.
📌Cover:- Cover needs to be improved
📌Title:- Title of the book is nice. Its best suited for the book.
📌Plot of the story is beautiful. It reminds us of our duty towards the the motherland and a feeling of a woman when she loses her husband and how hard it is to be a soldier's wife. Everyday you live in the perplexity of weather you will see your family member alive or not. It shows how a soldier keeps everything below its duty and that he was no more relation than the country and his service.
📌Description:- Make the blurb a little more interesting. You used good words but you need to edit the book. For example use inverted commas to quote dialogues since its a book and not a script. And then you use emojis frequently but rather why not use more text to describe the emotions rather than emotifying(its not an actually a word). I liked the part that you write the dialogues beautifully. What your characters feel, you express it the same to your readers which help you develop a bond between the protagonist and reader and when I writer can do so, people easily hook up to their books.
📌Writing style:- Your writing style is nice. Its decent. Use quotation marks properly.
Suggestions :-
•Work on the book cover. Since it needs major improvement. •There are little grammatical errors that you need to correct. •The dialogues that you write have to be properly enclosed within inverted commas.Describe a little more. •Work on blurb and make it more attractive.
Date:21.11.20
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