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🔱13||Paradox XOXO🔱

📌Reviewer : the_lost_stories
📌Book Name: Paradox XOXO
📌Author : FilledWithRage
📌Genre: dark romance
📌Chapters Read : 15

Summary:📜
Calvin Myers, a 27 yrs old virgin guy who never had a girlfriend and had been always rejected by girls. He thinks of himself as a loser and he feels that he lacks confidence and acts weird in front of girls. He had too much love to give but his feelings are not reciprocated by anyone, frustrated he decides to turn into a playboy or a fuckboy, who will not care for girls emotions but only wants to sleep with them.
He meets Tessa Sampsons, a 24 yrs girl who has just shifted to the city. Her past relationship was a nightmare and thus she hates boys who want girls only for their body. She wants a guy who can love her for what she is.
Calvin starts meeting Tessa with the excuse of showing her the city. He wants to bring her to his bed and Tessa, unknown to his intentions, finds a good friend in Calvin. They start hanging out and meeting each other and Calvin shows up as a decent and rich guy to sleep with her. Whereas Tessa starts feelings for him. Its

Review:📑

📌Cover: cover is not at all tempting. You need completely a new cover to attract a reader

📌Title: I love the title of the book, since its unique and out of the box. Kudos for the title selection.

📌Blurb: blurb is the first thing that readers read in your book. so, re-write it and also add a description of the girl protagonist.

📌Plot: Plot of the story is nice,it expresses the romantic emotions of common youth and their emotional problems.

📌Grammar: you have a good command on grammar, so there are no basic grammatical errors.

📌Character development:Descriptions of characters are good, one can easily connect to character’s emotions and their views. Development of Characters as the story proceeds is wonderful.

📌Overall impression: the plot is unique and very beautifully conveys the feelings of the characters. Story flows nicely describing each scenario wonderfully. The author's view on society’s existing judgemental and stereotype thinking is depicted nicely. Tressa gives a vibe of a girl next door that anyone can easily connect with her.

📌Suggestions:
* Go for a new cover, that can connect to your story and its theme.
* Rework on the blurb to make it more attractive. Describe Tessa as Your girl protagonist also plays an important part in the story.
* You can use bold or italic fonts to write the dialogues.

📌Would you recommend others to read it: yes! Ofcourse.

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.

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