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📌REVIEWER: @Twink_ling_STAR 📌BOOK NAME: Poisoned Love 📌AUTHOR: @dishatripathi7 📌GENRE: Fanfiction 📌CHAPTERS READ: 9(till the current end of the story)
📜SUMMARY~ It's a story about two souls, Abir and Mishti and their worlds apart. Abir Rajvansh, a famous buisnessman, is an arrogant and a strict boss who has a loveless and colourless life. He lost his mother at a tender age and none supported him then. His buddy, Kunal Mehrotra, is the only one who knows him inside out. Has clashes with his brother Ayan Rajvansh. Whereas, Mishti Verma, an orphan girl lands up at Abir's office as an employee. She only has her best friend and room partner, Kuhu as a family. She is a girl who believes in love unlike Abir. Kinda of attracted towards her boss and at the same time hates him because of his cold nature. She becomes a prawn of a Abir, who wants to take revenge from his own brother, Ayan.
📑REVIEW 📑
📌Cover: The cover is just perfect. Suits the story and is according to it. The dark theme, the characters, everything is perfect.
📌Title: The title is also suitable for the storyline. Indeed!
📌Blurb: The blurb has a lot to increase the curiosity in the minds of the readers. Just a read to the blurb and the curiosity and excitement would develop highly!
📌Grammar: The grammar used is another such thing to attract. Use of appropriate words at the right place is there. Readers can get fascinated easily towards the story.
📌Overall Impression: The overall impression is just awesome in its own way. Everything is neat and beautifully described including the cover, blurb, title and way of writing.
📌Suggestion: I'd like to give a few suggestions which may prove to be helpful.
•If possible, do write a little lengthy chapters, if possible!
•Just a work on the punctuation marks.
•Try to cover up a particular situation in just one para. And try not to divide in many para's of 6-7 lines.
•Depicting the emotions is another such way to make the readers fall in love with the story. Make use of songs by writing the lyrics which is suitable for that particular situation or add the link in the media box. Do try to put a few efforts on show casing the emotions.
📌Recommend a read to readers:- Yes! Of course you should give this story a try. It is a must read. Just different and unique storyline from the show making you fall for it. _________________ 🙂Aword from reviewer:
Hope you'd be satisfied with the results and suggestions! Thank you for giving me a chance to look up at your story:-)
Date- 09 October 2020
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