Feedbackwanted Stories

I'm in need of your feedback (whether you write your own stories or not): tell me what you liked, what you didn't like- anything I can improve on? I really want to bette...

When Amara, a young writer, discovers a mysterious ancient temple, she unwittingly unleashes a powerful force that draws the attention of Ikenna, a handsome and mysterio...

@DontPanicPanicPa gave me permission to write a sequel to their Vampire!Gerard Oneshot. You should probably look at that before reading this. WARNING: violence, but not...

A story about a war that has torn countries apart and almost completely destroyed both sides. This story shall be told from 3 seperate characters experience over 3 books...

Hi guys! Not sure if I want to continue with this story or not so I would appreciate your feedback! Thanks

To the girl I used to know. Broken but perfect. This is about one of my old best friends who I dont speak with anymore. She actually ended up doing very well for herself...

a small poem of an artistic family..I'd like feedback before moving forward and illustrating

Hey guys, so these are just a few poems and the writers would really like some feedback, so comment on them!! Really, comment anything you want and if you like it please...

Just the prologue of my Titanfall story/book I'm writing, I have no experience and I'm looking for feedback!

This is a book with a bunch of short stories I make up on the spot. This is my first book I have posted online. I am also new-ish to writing stories as i wrote some year...

Short Poem: Not much I can really say but I enjoy feedback and I hope someone will enjoy my dark imagery.

Hell is not easy to navigate when you're a flesh and blood human. Tom Ceader found a way to hell in search of a particular demon, Muninn. This particular Goetias name h...

Cedric was a well-known swordsman, always protecting his older brother. After helping his brother with a coup d'état, he was now the brother of the nation's Ruler. He st...

Hey! This is just a book of one-shots, and I would love to hear everyone's feedback on this so please feel free to comment! REQUESTS ARE OPEN!!!!!!

There's a wolf pack on an island called Flow Island by humans, but that was long ago. There aren't many packs of wolves on the large island, but it is mostly established...

This story follows Duncan Jones, a twenty year old living in the wastes of Boston, MA. I was heavily inspired by Fallout 4, and many other Fallout Spin-Offs, on this sit...

A major criminal plot is planned in London, leading to a group of young, unsuspecting heroes to be assembled by the MI6 to work together, despite their differences. Reve...

Hourglass Hearts is a short story inspired by one of my close friends, who at the time was going through a rough patch with his girlfriend, they decided to take a break...