Sufferring Stories

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Karen hates her life to the tip of dying. When she was young she lost her dad its not her fault. She was 10 standing near a cliff that was also near her grandmother's house. She was about to jump but then near a bush stood a boy who change everything...Time by time she would come and visit her grandmother only to see the same boy who hide in the same bush. But one day he had to leave and that tore her apart the friends she made when she met him all hated her. Now she's 16 what happens when that boy come's to her school? What happens if he change? Will he be able to change her again? Like before or will someone else save her this time...?

Love is a difficult phenomenon and according to me it is not present in this world. There is no such person in this world who could love you forever and ever and who could die saying your name. Or spent most of the time thinking about you and loving you. These are all just fantasies. There is no such thing as true love. It is just in books and movies. If in my life I fell in love that would probably be a nightmare.

His love was always held back by this damn thing called timing. It never worked out for him that's why he never wanted to love again. Yet fate, Ah fate, if only fate has a living body then he's twisted in the head and has a very different plan for him. And unlucky him the plan was what he despise the most... falling in love. "I swear to keep my heart close until my last breath! Until I die..." -Levinson Floyd, a man who hides his broken piece.

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Villafuerte Series #1 Loving someone can break you. That was the case for Zianna, she loved her husband too much that in the end she only bleed and suffered. She sacrifice and endured everything only to received pain. At nang hindi nya na kinaya ang sakit umalis sya at nagpakalayo layo, she hope to live her life free from pain. Away from the man whom she loved, Zeus Villafuerte, her ex husband. After so many years, they met again. She wonder, mayroon kayang nagbago kay Zeus? CAN YOU STILL FORGIVE THE ONE WHO GAVE YOU A PAINFUL SCARS AND MEMORIES? CAN YOU STILL GIVE HIM A SECOND CHANCE EVEN THOUGH YOU'RE NOT SURE IF HE'S REALLY WORTHY OF YOUR TRUST AGAIN.