GOLDEN STAR AWARDS 2020

Judging by @Lapata00

🎗Manan: Love & Family by iamunique_30

Cover- 4/5
(The cover is good but nothing attractive.)
Title- 5/5
( As the title portays, story really shows love and family.)
Blurb- 5/5
(The blurb is funny yet cute.)
Grammar- 10/10
(The grammar was good.)
Plot- 17/20
(The plot seems interesting. It's different and nicely written.)
Flow Of Writing- 10/10
( The story is going on smoothly and without any confusions.)
Character building- 10/10
(Characters are just as portrayed in the character sketch.)
Overall Impression- 11/15
(Overall, the story is fumny, interesting, and emotional too but the main focus is on family rather than the main couple (Manan).)
Total - 72/80
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🎗Atypically Married by Brownieislove

Cover (5/5)-
The cover is good. It depicts a marriage story.
Title (4/5)-
I can't say much about the title because the story hasn't reached 'Atypical Marriage' point so far.
Blurb (2/5)-
Blurb is not given in the description (I would suggest to write a good blurb as it attracts more and more readers).
Grammar (10/10)-
There were no grammatical mistakes in the story.
Plot (20/20)-
The plot of the story is interesting and new. The way you portrayed the love story between the protagonists is amazing.( P.S: I'm in love with your story 😍)
Flow of writing (10/10)-
Your way of writing stories is commendable. Story is going smooth without any confusion.
Character Building (10/10)-
The character building of the story nicely done. The role of characters were nicely portrayed.
Overall impression (15/15)-
Your story is really very attractive.  Readers would love the story because of the way and flow of writing plus some humour here and there.
Total- 76/80

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🎗My Mafia Husband by mahaenterprises

Cover- 4/5
(The cover depicts the story as Manik is in mafia and Nandini has two kids but yet the cover is not much attractive.)
Title- 5/5
(The title depicts the story line.)
Blurb- 5/5
(The blurb is confusing yet increases the curiosity of readers.)
Grammar- 2/5
(There are a lot of grammatical mistakes in the story.)
Plot- 20/20
(The plot is unique and full of suspense.)
Flow Of Writing- 9/10
( Story gets confusing at few places otherwise it goes on smoothly.)
Character building- 7/10
( The Characters of the story are very confusing. At beginning, you showed how strong Manik's character is yet he couldn't do anything to deny his father's order. According to story, Nandini should behave cold with Manik but she always gives into his demands)
Overall Impression- 13/15
(Overall, the story is good with bickering of kids, their bonding and a lot of suspense.)
Total- 65/80
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🎗The Play by inlovewsleep

Cover (3): Cover is good but it doesn't depict the storyline.
Title (5): Title depicts the storyline very well as the beginning and ending of the story involves "The Play".
Description (5): Your description makes the readers curious to know what's in the story.
Grammar (5): There were no grammatical mistakes in the story.
Storyline (10): Storyline was awesome. The way Manik along with the kids enacted their first meet for the proposal was incredible.
Overall Impression (15): Your way of writing the story was awesome. The flashbacks in the story are not at all confusing and are shown at right places to depict the emotions. Manik's way of proposing Nandini was unique and cute.
Total- 43/50
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🎗Vows by ainaessence

Cover (3/5)- The cover doesn't depicts the story.
Title (4/5)- Story revolves around their marriage but it doesn't show anything related to 'Vows' of a marriage.
Blurb (5/5)- The blurb makes the readers curious to know that how both the main protagonists have ended in such a situation.
Grammar (10/10)- The grammar was good.
Plot (18/20)- The plot is different from other stories and interesting too.
Flow Of Writing (10/10)- You did a nice work as the story went smoothly without any confusion.
Character building (7/10)- At the beginning, you showed Manik's character as the strongest one but then gradually it became weaker. There was no character sketch given.
Overall Impression (13/15)- Overall, the story was good but I personally feel it was dragged a bit.  Still, the story was great and I loved it.
Total- 57/80

Thank you so much Lapata00 for your judging ♥️