GOLDEN STAR AWARDS 2020

Judging by @brownieislove

🌟Judge Brownieislove

🌷ICH LIESE DICH by AditiTheGreat

Cover-4/5
Title-5/5
Description-4/5
Grammar-9/10
Storyline-7.5/10
Overall Impression- 13.5/15

Review- full marks for title as I can see the efforts (It's German). Good grammar just some small mistakes at the ending part. Storyline is good but I have read almost 10 books on that storyline so yeah. Overall impression was nice as it's a short story. Full marks for completing so many scenes in so much brief.

Total - 44/50
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🌷ZINDAGI NA MILEGI DUBARA by TeesyaSChhabra

Cover-4/5
Title- 3/5
Blurb- 3/5
Grammar- 8/10
Flow of writing- 7/10
Character building- 6.5/10
Overall impression- 12.5/15
Plot- 15/20

Review- title can be something about the relationship between dwija and bela. Couldn't really understand the connection between them( title and storyline). A very small description for a long story. Writing flow can be better (we donot have to explain each and every small detail). Plot is really interesting. I haven't read a story like this ever. Good plot. I just feel like no one is this good and accepting in real life as the characters in the story. I know it's fiction but I just couldn't relate anything happening in the story.
Total-58.5/80
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🌷YES MA'AM by bb_bhavya

Cover- 4.5/5
Title- 4/5
Blurb- 3.5/5
Grammar- 8/10
Flow of writing- 8.5/10
Character building- 7.5/10
Overall impression- 13.5/15
Plot- 18/20

Review- on point cover and title. The description can be better. I feel it's too short and lack of explanation because it's a long story. Good flow in the writing. Grammar is good with only few mistakes here and there. Character building can be better, with better explanation as the story progress. Full marks for thinking differently, it's not easy to write a arrogant girl boss and an innocent PA.
I can totally understand because I'm writing on the same concept (much self promotion 😂😂)
Total-66/80
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🌷KYA SE KYA HO GAYA DEKHTE DEKHTE by Behir_shrahir_love_
Kya se kya ho gaya dekhte dekhte

Cover- 3.5/5
Title- 3.5/5
Description- 4.5/5
Grammar- 9/10
Storyline- 8/10
Overall impression- 12.5/15
Total- 41/50

Review- I like the cover but I can't see anything new. Its just a cropped pic of behir with no editing. The title is not matching the storyline as I feel like. The description is quite good. Grammar is on point. I love the storyline but it's just that the story is not matching the title so couldn't connect that way.
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🌷DOCTOR'S LOVE by KalaiD3

Cover- 3/5
Title- 3/5
Blurb- 4.5/5
Grammar- 8/10
Flow of writing- 7/10
Character building- 7/10
Overall impression- 11/15
Plot- 16/20
Total- 59.5/80

Review- I feel like cover and title can be better. I don't think the title I matching the storyline.
There is not even a single scene where they are shown doing medical work or something related to doctor except for studying together that to in different departments. Liked the description it's suspenseful so yeah automatically attractive. Good grammar. No changes in characters. Overall impression was average because of the flow of story.

Thank you so much Brownieislove for your fair judgment ♥️