Judging by @teesyaschhabra

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🌷BADE ACCHE LAGTE HAI by AditiTheGreat
Cover : 5/5
Amazing cover i loved it .

Title : 5/5
It was absolutely according to the story .

Description : 4/5
As it was the combine book of short stories .

Grammar : 4/10
There were few mistakes . I hope that u know it as i didn't  like to mention proper details of anyone's story .

Storyline : 10/10
It was unique storyline basically of the problems face by a couple during the pregnancy which i haven't read till now so i am very much impressed by the topic u chose and loved the upbringing of the story.

Overall Impression : 14.5/15

Total : 47.5/50
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🌷LOCKDOWN WALA LOVE by behir_pearbhi_fam
Cover : 5/5
Amazing cover with the amazing color combination . I loved it

Title : 5/5
Perfectly suits to the story .

Description : 3/5
I felt that u can write little more about explaining the story like u can write the character sketch of both Bela and Mahir in short and the u can write that lets see how will these two will meet in this lock down .... Something like this .

Grammar : 8.5/10
Everything was going fine it was just that keep the story or you can say the single part of the story in a same tense which it is .

Storyline : 8/10
It wasn't a unique plot but ya i love the upbringing of the story .

Overall Impression : 13/15

Total : 42.5/50

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🌷FIXED LOVE by bb_bhavya
Cover : 4.5/5
It is very much better than the before one so , it is amazing but still little modifications can be there but it is fine .

Title : 5/5
Amazing title according to the story . I lived it .

Blurb :3.5 /5
I would like to have little more  description about the story .

Grammar : 8/10
There were few grammatical errors and more over i would like to say that use less emojis .

Plot : 13/20
It felt that i have read such kind of books before so it was all like similar

Flow of writing : 9/10
I felt little bit being confused in the dialogues .

Character Development : 10/10
Loved the development of the characters .

Overall impression :  11/15

Total : 64/80
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🌷DIL MUSAFIR HAI TERE ISHQ MEIN 2 by Behir_shrahir_love_
Cover : 2/5
It was a simple cover with a stylish name , I would like to suggest u that add some graphics to it to make it little more attractive for the readers .

Title : 5/5
It perfectly suits to the story so I like the title no matter how long it is .

Blurb : 5/5
Correct explanation of the story as per the attraction of the reader .

Grammar : 8.5/10
Everything was going fine it was just that keep the story or you can say the single part of the story in a same tense which it is .

Plot : 18/20
It wasn't a unique plot but ya i love the upbringing of the story .

Flow of writing : 9/10
As i said everything was in flow except the tense which fluctuated in between .

Character Development : 10/10
Loved the development of the characters .

Overall impression :  13.5/15

Total : 71/80
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🌷HEARTTHROB by Ritika_pearlie_fan
Cover : 5/5
It was a good cover according to the title .

Title : 5/5
Amazing title according to the story . I loved it .

Blurb : 5/5
Correct explanation of the story as per the attraction of the reader .

Grammar : 6.5/10
There were few grammatical errors and more over i would like to say that use less emojis .

Plot : 17.5/20
The plot was quite common but i like the way how u make that plot with your own imagination and twists in it .

Flow of writing : 8/10
The story was in flow but the fact was sometimes the dialogue goes little bit confusing .

Character Development : 10/10
Characters were very well written and explained .

Overall impression :  12/15

Total : 69/80
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Thank you TeesyaSChhabra  for your judgement ♥️

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