GOLDEN STAR AWARDS 2020

Judging by @bb_bhavya

🌟JUDGE bb_bhavya

🌷ICE CREAM DATE {OS}by AditiTheGreat

Cover-3.5/5
Cover is very nice and colourful. I liked it. You can add your name in it too as cover of book should have name of its author.

Title- 3/5
By reading name first time 'ice cream date' gives a rough idea that maybe main couple met on an ice cream date or something related to it because sometimes people take literal meaning. But after reading it comes to know there is a difference. There was no actual date but if we see in other way like you tried to portray it gives a heart warming vibe.

Description-4/5
See in particular if we see this story didn't had any separate description as it is in a book of one shots but the description of this book is good. Many people fail to give a proper description to a book of shots and give only this is book of one shots but you have given more. You could add two lines before this shot or can say in each shot you write, giving a brief idea to people what they are about to encounter.

Grammar- 8.5/10
Your grammar is good. Do look for use of punctuation marks. But full mark is not given because there is always a scope for improvement.

Storyline-8/10
Your story is good but it was not smooth at some places. Mahir ignores Bela and find her responsible for his mother's situation was fine but when doctor told him that Bela donated her liver and it was already in bad condition then the way he behaved was little insensitive but that's the demand of story and his character I understand but when same thing his mother said then he understood that how much she has also suffered and immediately he realised his love. That was little bumpy.
Moreover the plot is very nice.

Overall Impresion- 14/15
Overall impression is good and I suggest all those people who like to read a little emotional love story with a happy end should read it. Bela's love on her part was beautiful. Mahir's behaviour was not that good initially. The only thing which I didn't liked Mahir didn't realised the fact when doctor told him but later when he talked with his mother but it shows mothers can make their child everything, which is good.
All over it is a beautiful story.

Total-42/50
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🌷LOVE LIKE NO OTHER by Sulekha1029

Cover-4.5/5
It is a nice cover. However as there is always a scope for improvement so half mark is deducted.

Title- 4/5
Listening the name 'Love like no other's gives a good vibe. It's a nice name and hints that some different will happen. I hope the story stands by it's name in future by setting a different example of love.

Blurb- 3/5
Blurb is very simple. It tells that it a story on our beloved behir. You wrote a question "How behir became friends?" etc..but there should be something that build up interest to get answer of this question. Some little situation or a scene which tells about the plot.

Grammar-7/10
You need to work on your grammar a little. There are small small mistakes and do not ignore punctuation marks. First letter of sentence must be capital and there should be full stop at the end of sentences. These little things make the work look more good.

Plot-16/20
From all the chapters that I have read, it tells that it a nice, sweet simple plot. Bela started working as a pa of Mahir and both started to like each other. Now at the current point they have realised and about to confess. Little suggestion do not let any third person separate them or create any misunderstanding. It will only ruin it the story. Story is going with a nice flow. Title 'Love like no other' tells something different or unique will happen. But the plot is simple. You should add something to show depth of their love or something which differentiates them from others. It is not necessary to be sad or emotional. Writers or people sometimes mistook separation of lovers or a love triangle as only option to portray it as example of being different .