Keep it realistic.
Dude put all the weird shit in sure, like zombies aren't real (yet) but think about if you were in that situation...
Would you or your character really say that?
Could you jump that high?
Would anyone anywhere in the world actually react like that???
Damn okay sure, fucking Emma is freaking out because of an arrow wound:
"omg hehe Wilbur save me!" Emma yells out in pain and amusement.
"omg baby gorl, is you okie?" my mans kneels down beside her, aces inches away.
"nooooo I'm in pain." Emma cries into her hands.
"Take a deep breath I'll pull it out."
"hehe oh that was painful!" Emma giggles, standing up and walking away, Wil not far behind her.
Like Jesus Christ 🙏
Keep the arrow penetrated within yourself until you get medical attention, for starters. Secondly, whom the fuck walks away from an injury like that.
(Emma is not a real person, I'll be using the name to mock the writing style or choices)
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Everything wrong with MCYT fan fictions
Fiksi PenggemarThis is just me ranting about fan fiction. If this offends you I am genuinely sorry but it's my opinion and that won't change. On that note, do whatever you want I'm not going to stop you, just maybe look out for some possible tips. All images found...
