The Chosen One

Chapter 1: The Unexpected Visiters

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Ten years later and Ten years of looking for my parents killers. I was sitting on the couch and I just finished my searching and failed once again. I got up and got a shower and when I got to my room and stripped down and went to the bathroom and got in the shower. When I heard a sound in the kitchen down stairs I got out and went down stairs in just a towel and robe. I went down stairs and listened "Where is she I can't find her?"a man's voice said. "She is probably in her room and where is William?"another man said. "I am here" I heard from behind me "and the girl is spying," he chuckled. I looked behind me and there for sure is a man and he is not looking at my face but my twins. The men surrounded me and I just calmed myself down and got ready to attack. When they came at me I was ready and I fought back and good it took and hour but I brought them down and went and got dressed after tying them up. When I came down stairs I was done for there were about twenty men and all just as buff as the others. The other men were untied and standing and glaring at me. They all came after me at once and I fought down at least ten of them before I was caught and held there. "Nice seeing you again," he said before I blacked out.