disney's dinosaur rewrite

chapter 9; the storm

we see aladar still out in the desert calling for plio and zini.

aladar; " plio! zini! i dont understand did i do something wrong? "

a storm begins to grow and rocks flies into the air hitting aladar in the head knocking him out.

we see the herd strugling to move forward as the storm rages on neera turns around and see's aladar lying in the desert unconcious.

kron; " leave him we need to keep moving "

neera; " No "

kron turns around at her in shock.

kron; " what? "

neera; " im going after him "

kron; " i cant beleive it your letting love get in the way of survival. your emotions make you   weak "

neera; " if thats true why are you still talking to me? "

he seems taken aback and she runs to the storm looking for aladar frantically.

meanwhile we see yar, eema, naelyn, earl and brutton walking at the back of the herd.

brutton; " wait for me kron, neera, anyone "

eema; " welcome to the bottom of the herd brutton even if they can hear you they will just ignore you "

naelyn; " we need to get to safety "

they run towards a cave. Slowly getting in they pass a waterfall and rest on the ground.

meanwhile we see neera has found aladar lying in the desert. She grabs onto him when all of a sudden a gang of gigntoraptors suround her. She hisses at them. And slashes ones face. One of them pins her to the ground and is about to kill her when all of a sudden the storm grows bigger it rips a dead tree out of the ground and knocks one to the ground. The rest of the pack run away from the storm. The velociraptor picks up her unconcious companion and runs to the cliff.

she see's that the herds footprints up ahead is disapearing due to the sand storm but see's some footprints heading inside the cave. She rushes into the cave with aladar and he wakes up.

aladar; " w-what happened? "

meanwhile we see the tyranosaurus duo smashing up the tree's the storm throws at them as they slowly aproach the cave.