( Some of yall [ srry for my texas speak] are going to hate me for what I'm about to say, but here we go. With school in play and I have other books I am writing I was thinking. I think it is time to finish this thing. Maybe at chapter 29 or so. But if yall want it to go farther I am prepared to stop it around 30. So if you want me to keep going past that comment below and tell me if you think it is about tie or if I should keep going.)
Max
I was sitting in a tree starring out into the sky, feeling the wind on my face. The moon lined with a glow so powerful that it could make you cry. Stars dangled from the sky, scattered across a wild canves.
"Sometimes I forget how bad I've got when I look up at the sky." Fang said, as he sat on the branch next to me.
In my lap was a girl with a beutiful mop of blounde curls. She was around six and was as cute as a button. In her was a solid black dog with white wings. I stocked the little girls hair nd held her close as she shivered.
Soon the memory went away and was replaced by another.
Fang and I were sitting in a tent, holding each other close. Fang kissed my neck then spoke, " I hated seeing you get shot at today."
"You have seen me get shot at plenty of times."
"But today was diffrent." He moved closer slowly and carfully putting his lips on mine. When he pulled back my lips tingled. It felt wonderful.
Then soon even that memory went away and I was left in the dark.
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I opened my eyes to see smooth black hair swirling into vision, "Fang were are we?"
He looked down at me, happy to see I was awake, "We are in one of the parks in the New York area."
What," How did we end up here? I thought we lived in Arizona."
Fangs scanned my face. Then he came out with a stupid question, "What are the names of the people in the flock?"
I gave him a famous are-you-okay- look," Ahhh... You, me, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, and Angel."
Fangs lips slid into a smile then he pulled me into a hug. Kissing me on the neck,"Your back."
I didn't know I left. I thought then I was at a point were I couldn't breath, "Fang let go I can't breath."
He pulled just in time for me to pass out right back into his arms.
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Unforgetable (a Maximum ride novel)
Fantasy(Please note that i wrote this in the 5th grade and adk that no spelling errors and grammer mistakes be pointed out.) Maximum Ride,The Flock ,and Fang's Gang have come together to stop the Doomsday, but one day Max goes missing. With evrybody on the...
