Dare

18 part 2

Can you point out Elena, Caroline, and Bonnie? You'll get a shout out if u can!

Mak's pov

I look around on the roof top to see that I'm the only Amity this year. I only know one person here. Elena Gilbert. She's one of the only Abnegation this year. Beside her are her friends Bonnie Bennett and Caroline Forbes.

Elena and Caroline have let their wavy hair down but Bonnie still stands with a strict knot in her hair. Either she has a massive afro that she hiding in strict form or she wants to keep a part of her first 16 years of existence.

I walk over the the girls. Caroline and Bonnie offer small smiles and wave. Elena however says, "Mackenzie, I can't believe you're here! I would've never thought that I'd see you after our parents cut our connection!"

I smile and reply, "Please, call me Mak. But yeah, I didn't think I'd ever see you again. But it's really, really, good to see you."

"You know Bonnie and Caroline right?" She asks politely.

"Actually they used to come to the fields to help me collect crops. So yeah, we've known each other for a couple years."

We look over the edge to see that 2 Candor and 1 Erudite didn't make it. It's a message that I have a chance. A chance to save me a spot in my dream faction.

~~2minuteslater~~

"My name is Max and I'm the head of Dauntless leadership. The second part of your training, for those of you who dare, is to jump off this ledge. It's the member's entrance. If you don't jump, you fail. You either wait for the train so you can take it to Factionless or just die here of dehydration. But if you're smart, you'll jump. You'd be perfectly safe after you jump off the ledge. So who wants to go first?" He says with a smile. It's scary how he even smiled about leaving teenagers Factionless or leaving them to die.

No one moves. No one speaks. You can barely here anyone breath. Everyone is too scared to do anything. There is such a small possibility of someone jumping for fun but they need motivation.

I grab Elena's arm and tug her with me to the edge. I give her a ready look.

"On three." I whisper.

"One."

"Two."

"Three-AHHHHHHH!!" We both scream. After 6 seconds of free falling, we hit a net with a hard blow. There are a few hands outstretched towards us. I grab a large hand and Elena grabs a smaller hand.

"Well, Four, there are two first jumpers! What's you're names?" The short blonde girl asks. But now that I think of it, I saw this girl in the fields helping as well. And this "Four" guy, he looks a lot like Marcus, my uncle.

"Mak. Would be me, but why did you call the tall one Four? His name is Tobias."

A/N YAYYYY I UPDATED!!!!!! I meant to put this up yesterday but I felt like this needed a better ending so I changed it up. So... gene clan and it's not directly siblings. Weird huh? If you ever want to give me advice or you have a request for a quote or a weird thing that could happen just comment. And no mean comments! I try to be on top of my chiz, but my life has been really packed of the late. So PLEASE comment. I usually like the comments and they sometimes get me to write more. I think this is more than last time so g'd night!