It is pretty good. The quotes you used, gave an idea of broken word.
✑ Cover
Is pretty ok but broken vibes are required in it which will match with your idea.
✑ Title
Title is perfect. As the word broken already described the book.
✑ Prologue/blurb
As it is not their so nothing to say about it but you carried your story nicely without it.
✑ Plot idea
As it is your idea so you know the story more before me. I would love to say that give some change in it also like a little changes not a big one. Rather then your plot is pretty well.
✑ Description
Your way of description do give broken feels which is nice and match with title. You carry this one nicely so keep it up dear.
✑ Character development
The way you dedicated the songs to the characters, which actually describes them is attractive and different too. I personally liked your idea over this so keep it the way it is as it is giving nice effect to your book.
✑ Writing Style
The way you write is ok as the first thing which disappoints is that you are just using letters for characters dialogue. And another thing do give some spice to your chapters like using bold words or underlines and you can even go with symbols. Your writing style matters a lot and it also attracts readers if they enjoy reading straight imagination.
✑ Suggestions
As i said just give some spice to your writing style as it is required a bit more and if you talk about cover then do change it like give it a totally broken vibes along with bold looks of your characters. And do give some change in plot.
✑ Overall review
The main thing i loved is song one which is the best part of your book and different too. But some things bring this book down from being perfect is your some mistakes which i already told before so work on it and your book will surely be loved by readers more.
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