Cover is what I liked. Its a fantastic job my the maker.
✑ Title
It totally implies on the story.
✑ Prologue/blurb
It is not their so cant say about it.
✑ Plot idea
It is wonderful. Plot is working.
✑ Description
It was worthy but You should add some derailed writing in it.
✑ Character development
The characters are well mantained. All have different roles to play.
✑ Writing Style
All I could say that, you should really go gor detail thing. Like the body language, the aura filled in the room, eye rolls in a cute fights, sassy replies and an unexpected closeness with cute gestures. This is what you can do.
✑ Suggestions
Spice is required in your story. You should write in detail as I said before with extra dialogues and some sort of expressions while a reply to a dialogue or to receive it. You can take help from "How to improve writing" from watty books.
✑ Overall review
It is a good one but do edit it giving it a perfect look.
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