Your concept is Unique, as it has a huge number of cast so I wondered how they will be balanced.
✑ Cover
Cover is simple one but it is a beautiful. Though you can go for another theme in it making it perfect.
✑ Title
It is perfect according to the plot you have choosen. It suits to the plot well, as there are mysteries in it.
✑ Prologue/blurb
Its a simple one. So I would love to suggest that you can make it perfect by adding some scenes of the plots so it will unique and eye catching too.
✑ Plot idea
To be honest, I loved it! It is so unique as it contains mysteries as per the title and that gives goosebumps at certain points after following the mystery.
✑ Description
Its quite ok type. So I will suggest that something more should be add and some sort of descriptive so it will be eye catching for readers and you will gain more.
✑ Character development
As you know that from start I wondered that how you will manage them so I would like to say that the main leads are managed well and developed nicely so I would love to read the same thing for side characters too.
✑ Writing Style
Scenes were perfectly written with unique words and they were explained beautifully. But on the same time it should be explained deeply with long chapters and moreover it will hook up more readers.
✑ Suggestions
As I said before, I would like to read long chapters and some sort of side characters development along with a slight change in description and prologue part.
✑ Overall review
Unique concept with lot of mysteries and twist. And being your book's daily reader, I always wait for new chapter after new one so I would love to say that it is just an amazing book.
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