Its pretty good but I felt like something better can be done if you wish to.
✑ Title
Title is definitely matching the plot so thumbs up for the title.
✑ Prologue/blurb
Being a reader of your book I felt it attractive at first. It was nice but you can surely go for a little bit in that way.
✑ Plot idea
The plot is quite impressive though being a basic one as the scenes you kept are fab which made readers to like it and the urge for readers about next chapter increases.
✑ Description
Its a bit low as you should definitely try to give a bit more explanation about the characters so it gets better.
✑ Character development
As said some what description is required of characters and all the characters are placed well so its good.
✑ Writing Style
Its working but it would be better if you describe it more and some spice in writing so your readers love to read while feeling the expressions so do work over expressing in pov.
✑ Suggestions
It would be better if you change the cover and do work over your writing style a bit and yeah some sort of description is required and rather than this everything is good at their own place.
✑ Overall review
I enjoyed reading it. Some sort of changes are required as i said before. But all things are good and I enjoyed reading this one.
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